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Post by tierneyisling on Jan 25, 2011 10:21:28 GMT -5
Anya Striker « Thread Started Today at 10:18am »
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Name:Anya Striker Race: Half Ishbalan/ Drachman. Alchemy: a little bit of every thing XD the avatar of alchemy XD Title: The Fallen Angel Alchemist SPECIAL POWERS! SHE HAS WINGS! thats because she's half GOD. Um......Part of the amestrian Army...aka CENTRAL COMAND! um surrogant father is ROY MUSTANG! um love interest LING YAO! yays. BIO. After her mom was killed by kimbly during the civil war Anya runs in a hurry to escape the same fate. she then accidently runs into a certain trio of soliders- Roy Mustang, Risa Hawkeye, and Maes Hughes. They are not sure what she is-due to the fact that she has pale skin and auburn hair (but she does have red eyes soooo) they take her in and smuggle her to safety! then roy took her in and teaches her alchemy. AND! she can fly. because she has wings. ....YA'!!! she became a state alchemist at age 13.
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Post by Kuri-Kara on Feb 9, 2011 1:05:03 GMT -5
I'm sorry to tell you this, but she's still a Mary Sue. PLEASE for the sake of all that is awesome about FMA, look at other people's characters and try to fix yours by what you see in others' character profiles.
I'm not trying to be mean, I'm trying to help you develop a better character.
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Post by naokoelric2250 on Feb 10, 2011 19:34:14 GMT -5
And now, with the added bit that she has became a State Alchemist at thirteen, she is one of the worst Mary-sue OCs I have ever seen. Seriously, I have seen joke Mary-sues who are better than this.
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Post by Kuri-Kara on Feb 14, 2011 2:06:46 GMT -5
>< This character is more like GODMODE mixed with MARY-SUE.
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Post by naokoelric2250 on Feb 17, 2011 3:40:37 GMT -5
Yup. And they are one of the worst kinds of them.
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Post by Kuri-Kara on Feb 17, 2011 22:36:58 GMT -5
I know I know only too well
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